I see what you meant in your comments about getting caught up in the action but there's no real choice is there? It's just that the character development sort of takes a back seat, although you've managed to build in quite a bit.
I must admit that I always liked that line about "You take the 30000 on the left..." :-)
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I must admit that I always liked that line about "You take the 30000 on the left..." :-)